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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Tue Jul 13, 2010 2:36 pm

" Well, you teleported, all over the place. . . And theres a voice in your head, or am I mistaken? " Kraft said,
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Tue Jul 13, 2010 2:48 pm

(since when was there a voice in my head?)

"just do what ever your going to do will you."
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Tue Jul 13, 2010 3:15 pm

( My character was assuming lol )

" I expel you from from Dark Lord Tedryn! Begone! " Kraft said, as he cast lightning on Tedryn, it then turned white, and was so hot, that it began to melt the Duranium. It didn't melt Kraft, or Tedryn, for it wasn't designed to hurt the user. It would hurt Tedryn, with excruciating pain, for a couple seconds, then Kraft stopped. " How do you feel? " Kraft said,
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Tue Jul 13, 2010 3:18 pm

"how would I know I'm not even possessed
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Tue Jul 13, 2010 3:56 pm

" Yes you are, now, you'll go through a vision, and see inside of yourself. . . " Kraft said, as he seemingly punched Tedryn in the stomach, but actually overloaded him with the Force. Which would knock him out, and go into a vision. . .
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Tue Jul 13, 2010 9:31 pm

(OOC: From me, I was speaking in your head, Teryn.)
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:46 pm

After kraft left the cell, Teryn fell to the ground, his eyes went from there red state to having no pupils at all. An officer who was next to Kraft go freaked out.

In his vision state, teryn was in an all white room, with no visible entrance, In a fit of anger, he used his force powers to destroy the room he was him, he succeed and some how saw him self in courscant. he saw the jedi temple in the background, this made him ultimatum angry and made him go into a blind rage, he ran do the place, he used to live. killing any one on the way including several civilians.

He finally got there to his old place, he saw his wife there all well and playing with his children, he was flying above the window. His wife saw him and got scared she came over to the window, instantly recognising Teryn, "Alex is that you, what have you don to your self." thinking that this was some kind of illusion he went back in to blind rage and killed his wife and children. and used to force to destroy the building.

After being in hiding for an hour, he herd on the holonet that a jedi by the Name of Alex Thire, had gone rouge and killed several civilians, he looked him self in the mirror and saw that it was him self that cause him to become a Sith.

he again was in light room, with no entrance, and soon returned to his cell, his pupils returned only this time very much more red. the collar around him just fell off from him. he then just teleported away.

he appeared on Courscant near the area were, he massacred his family. after a while of just staring at the building, finally coming to accept the fact it was his own fault that caused him to do what he did.
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:50 pm

" Teryn, what have you done! You've let yourself go, and let your instincts take in, like a Gray! Well done, and your family. . . Luckily for you, there is a way to bring them back. . . " Kraft said, echoing in Teryn's head
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Thu Jul 15, 2010 3:53 pm

Teryn at 1st thinking Kraft was near him, looked around , but found no think.
"Ware are you?"
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:03 pm

" Speaking to you telepathically, I'm on Byss. I can bring back your loved ones, they can be brought back. " Kraft said,
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:57 pm

"That's impossible, it can't be done"
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:13 pm

" No it's not, I'll prove it. . . " Kraft said,
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:49 pm

Teryn thinking he was inane, teleported him self on top of a very high building and force jumped off, hoping the drop would kill him. He closed his eyes and awaited his fate. His body landed very violently scraping across a 1000m long street, he felt little to no pain from this. the crowd surrounding him were in shock,

He got up and saw the left side of his cloths were ripped and most of the flesh around his left side had been removed. he walked a few steps, and saw a glove, some think made him just want this glove. he went over to hi and put it on his right hand, then fainted.

moments later and Ardent cruiser appeared over above and a shuttle came a collected him.
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:19 am

" Teryn, there is no way you could've survived that fall, I believed you were possessed. I was wrong, " Kraft said, as Teryn would wake up on a couch. " I believe you to be the chosen one, sorry for the hostilities earlier, I believed you to be possessed, and possession is a serious thing, I was worried. " Kraft said,
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:37 am

Teryn, looked around and saw kraft, at the other side of the room, he looked again this time for the glove, "I had a glove were is? "


(the glove http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Glove_of_Darth_Vader)
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:27 am

Kraft was then surprised he remembered the glove. " The glove, was evil, it's been contained, until we find out what it is. . . " Kraft said, blocking his mind. " Oh, I almost forgot, " Kraft said, he then opened the door, and Tedryn's children came running into the room yelling, " DADDY! " the children yelled. Then his wife was there, " I told you, I may have said I could bring them back, but they weren't dead. Just hanging on the thread of life, " Kraft said,
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:43 am

(NOTE: Please refer back to the Sith Tomb where we all had our discovery adventures. Many people found various of things. I found many things but luckily it wasn't a glove of Darth Vader.)
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:58 am

(why did you bring his kids back... I mean really?)
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:07 am

( Why wouldn't you want your kids back? )
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:53 am

( I wanted to show you that the Empire can give you anything and more. . . Including bringing back your loved ones, )
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:12 am

(he's a Sith why would he want his loved ones back?"
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:31 am

( The Sith are allowed to love, and support passion, and there's passion in a marriage and being a family isn't there? )
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:58 am

yeah, but remember, he killed his family, I doubt he'd want to see them again.
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:20 pm

( Yeah, but that doesn't mean that I think that, maybe I thought that it would make you happy, and believe the Empire can do anything. )
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PostSubject: Re: Redemption    Mon Jul 19, 2010 10:54 am

(note the teleportion power is permanent but I won't be using it much after this Rp. )

As His children rushed to him , he jumped and grabbed Kraft, he then teleported him self and Kraft, to his ship the "Deaths Hand". the crew of the Death hand were relived to see there commander, as he hadn't been on the ship in a while.

he ushered his crew away. "how dare you bring them back, you had no right." he said as the ship started to come out of orbit of Byss.
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